If I recall it, I came up with the idea of Peter's house first. Then, about four comics later, I had to figure out how they'd actually get inside. "Get inside Peter's house" was kind of the adventure hook for this arc, so I had to figure something out.

I recall seeing stilt houses like that on beaches in Florida, to protect against flooding. I like Peter's reasoning better, though.

I like Peter's first line. It's the kind of line that moves the plot forward. Simple, declarative, and entirely wrong. The original instructions were "Peter: (grandly, as if he were announcing that he intended to scale Mt. Everest or hunt tigers) "

Wait a minute. I must've rewritten either this one or the last one. Peter goes from "I saw it once!" to "What makes you think I saw your act?". I'm going to declare that it's entirely in character for him.

So, did Brisbane and Peter actually get reviewed? Are there folks going around reviewing vaudeville acts? I mean, where would the reviews run?

Yes, intercepting the handshake means that the deal is with Kimberly. It's legally binding, you know.

    

So long, it's been good to know you Where we are and how we got there Unlike Minerva: Under Siege When Peter met Nina A Talk No Sleep Blues A journey Unlike Minerva presents a Fairy Tale Meanwhile... Love Nina Again Meanwhile at the Theatre (Art Week) Something Else Vaudeville Clearance You Must Learn All Night Long Emily Partnership Peter's House Guest week Prince Belac Mercury Ghost Hunt Sorcery Hodges Nina Haunted Library Videogenesis One Page jealousy Tripwire 2000 Actless You Get Brighter Ryan in Disguise (with glasses) Kiranga Spycraft As transitive as a verb Sofia's Descendants Sofia vs. Caleb Kimberly vs Brisbane The Impressive Trap The Tell-tale Watch True Love Cheap Laughs Meanwhile in France Prelude